Saturday, March 8, 2014

Sometimes Smush Song Syllables

Sometimes you need to spread out syllables
in your song lyrics  so that you can enunciate well at the tempo.
But sometimes you need to smush syllables together.
Long time spaces between  syllables -- especially in  slow song --
might give the song listener a few moments to reach a
    wrong guess    about what the next word will be....
       and like in conversations,  we do often "fill in the blank" and
       ANTICIPATE (Guess)  what the next song WORD might be -- 
              with the extra clue that it probably rhymes! -- then we should
be sure to    make those syllables closer together in time.     

Since it's hard to explain the very important concept, here's an example
for a rather slow 4/4 time prayer song to God 
                             (Psalm 119 LLW 33 He - on my website DianaDeeOsborneSongs.com ):
Each syllable is a quarter note for a steady pace:
In - cline  my heart to Your Word. __
I'd   be    self- ish   with- out You. __

As the singer slowly shares the message of the last line,
the listener has time to "fill in the blanks" with some phrase like
I'd   be    self- ish  with  the  LORD   (rhymes with line 1).

Obviously that concept does not match what's in the Bible.
Easy quick fix:   Sing the words "selfish" and "without"
         as 1/8th notes  instead of steady quarter notes:
In - cline  my heart to Your Word. __
I'd   be  (self- ish) __ (with- out) __  You. __

That also gives an energy to the slow song... and
a  dramatic pause that emphasizes each key word.

Much joy to you in calculating strategies into the lyrics for your music!
©2014 DianaDee Osborne;  all rights reserved - BUT feel free to share with copyright info

Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Busy Songs To Avoid... by DianaDee Osborne

How do you get all of your message into one song?
It's a big temptation to try to do.
After all, your goal is probably more than money as a songwriter.
You're an intelligent person with lots of ideas.
NO one thinks exactly as you.  So ....  how do you
       share all your ideas  in your own unique song?

Probably, you can't.  But hey, this is good news!
          It just means you get to write a 2nd (or etc.) song!

Hint... not from an "expert" but from a fellow musician with some experience.  There are over 300 full samples that you can hear at no cost at my website (click on link below).
EXAMPLES   at   DianaDeeOsborneSongs.com      (link)      
       All are copyrighted, but you may use privately    (see ABOUT US tab for details):
  
Specific Song Example,  copyright 2014 by DianaDee Osborne; all rights reserved
LO  AND  BEHOLD  BLESSINGS      Click here for lyrics

I began this gospel style fusion rock song planning to use the following pattern:
   Verse 1:      This Morning I woke up, Put my feet....   [what happened]
   Verse 2:      This Afternoon, I ....  [what happened]
   Verse 3:      This Evening, I .....    [what happened]

But what I found was that many things fit into morning activities that could have been perceived as blessings -- too many to fit into a single verse.
And two verses per time period?  No, a  6-verse song can annoy listeners...
          especially if each time period was followed by a chorus!

So, to avoid being too "busy", I limited this song to only
 "THIS MORNING"  for each verse.
Afternoon and Evening must wait 'til another day, another song:)
 I suggest that you too may want to avoid   "BUSY"  songs,      
       to better    share  the  HEART  OF  YOUR  MESSAGE          
                            to your  future song  listeners.                          

Much joy to you in designing art patterns  into your song lyrics! 
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©2014 DianaDee Osborne;  all rights reserved - BUT feel free to share with copyright info.

Thursday, January 16, 2014

Easy Way to BLOG Draft Song Lyrics

Hello!  The following songs are listed on my blog 
                     DianaDee Osborne Song Stories
that is linked to my  main  website:  
         http://dianadeeosbornesongs.com/Home.php
BUT  these do not yet have completed music.

For SONGWRITERS -- This is a very efficient way to 
(1) Publish AND thus copyright protect (because publication date is included) drafts before you have completed the music;  and
(2) Keep a Record of what songs you still are working on!
It's easy to lose track when you are always getting ideas for new songs!    
                                      May you find much joy in knowing this:
  NOTHING  is  impossible 
when you humbly ask God to help you.  Philippians 4:13, "I can do ALL things through Christ Jesus who strengthens me."

And I'll add that   EPHESIANS 3:20-21    is a KEY PROMISE FROM GOD in my Life:
 God "is able to do FAR MORE THAN WE ASK OR THINK"
(for HIS glory, verse 21).  I assuredly never would have dreamed even 5 years ago that God would honor me with developing...
I think the 2 studios have now recorded close to 350 songs that I wrote and prepared initial music tracks for -- with COMPLETED, partially mastered song recordings now.
           I quit counting... No need. It's God's Working.

BLOG  DRAFTS  LIST   Example:  
As always, all information on this blog is copyrighted.
Example also shows update to  existing list when a song's lyrics are recorded:
This entry is copyright 2014 by DianaDee Osborne, all rights reserved.

CLICK ON LINKS to go directly to song lyrics:

Gonna Be One Of Those Days (song lyrics), by DianaDee Osborne  1-15-2014 

EARLIER LYRICS drafts-- MUSIC STILL BEING WORKED:

     (oops- gotta compare and delete one!  This is ALSO good way to find duplicates!)

Friday, June 7, 2013

How to DESIGN song lyrics: PATTERNS.... by DianaDee Osborne

        I like patterns and logical flow.  
So in many "DianaDee" songs, you'll see verses develop using similar words but deeper meaning as the song moves forward.  This blog will use as its example my 2009 song "Standing On My Knees".  To obtain the AUDIO ONLY  download (FREE),  CLICK HERE .

To obtain the written lyrics as well as a link  for the audio (still free),
         CLICK HERE   .

1)  In this song is a pattern of physical position
       Stand >  Walk > Sit > Lie.  Notice that I also used logic in the order...
       You must Stand before you can Walk.
       After you walk, you may be tired and want to Sit.
       And,  most often,  you will sit before you Lie down.

2)  This song also takes a lyric line that expands a concept  as the song develops.
      "Protect me from THOUGHTS that hurt you"    is expanded through the verses to
              "..... WORDS.....   DEEDS .......  A  HEART. "

But often I will create a cohesion among the verses.  For example, in this song,
  I  begin with a concept that is common to every verse   
            ("HOW YOU AWE ME, MY GOD") 
 and then circle them back to a common conclusion   
           ("I need YOUR help lest I hurt You"). 

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FULL EXAMPLE:
STANDING ON MY KNEES,  ©2009 DianaDee Osborne,  all rights reserved.
1
I stand on my knees in awe of You. Though I must stand, still my heart prays.
When I think about all that You have been, though standing, my heart kneels in praise.
HOW YOU AWE ME, MY GOD!  No words can explain
the peace and great joy you bring me!
Please rest in my love, I beg on my knees.
   Protect me from THOUGHTS that hurt you.   
I need YOUR help lest I hurt You.

2
I walk on my knees in awe of You. Though I must walk, still my heart prays.
When I think about all that You promised, though walking, my heart kneels in praise.
HOW YOU AWE ME, MY GOD! No words can explain
the peace and great joy you bring me!
Please rest in my love, I beg on my knees.
Protect me from WORDS that hurt you.
I need YOUR help lest I hurt You.

3
I sit on my knees in awe of You. Though I must sit, still my heart prays.
When I think about all that You have done, though sitting, my heart kneels in praise.
HOW YOU AWE ME, MY GOD! No words can explain
the peace and great joy you bring me!
Please rest in my love, I beg on my knees.
   Protect me from DEEDS that hurt you.     
I need YOUR help lest I hurt You.

4
I lie on my knees in awe of You. Though in my bed, still my heart prays.
When I think about all that You shall do, though weak in bed, still my heart prays.
HOW YOU AWE ME, MY GOD! No words can explain
the peace and great joy you bring me!
Please rest in my love,  I beg on my knees.
   Protect me from a HEART that hurts you.   
I need YOUR help lest I hurt You.
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Much joy to you in growing your music!
©2013 DianaDee Osborne;  all rights reserved - BUT feel free to share with copyright info.

Saturday, May 11, 2013

Creating a Pattern Track ..... by DianaDee Osborne

One of the old jokes about country songs:
All you have to be able to play are the chords  G, C, and D.
Not a very humorous joke.... but sometimes this GCD skeleton is the basic type of structure for a song. 

On a short, easy song, it's easy to record a rhythm guitar track and then add lyrics on the vocal track.  But for a longer song, I myself keep "getting Lost"... losing count of how many times I played that C chord before the next chord change.

I've found this hint to be more work at the start, but tremendously easier in the project development:  
Simply 
1.   Sing   a DRAFT vocal track WITH the guitar, recorded as one track.  

2.   Then go back and -- using this  (draft) PATTERN TRACK along with your CLICK track in the headphones,  record the guitar track.  You can easily hear chord changes in the Pattern Track.  No more counting measures to remember how long to play one chord before the next change.

3.  Finally,  using the new guitar track, record your vocal track  as usual.

EASY 2nd hint --  If desired, sing verse 1's words for every verse of the pattern track.  You don't care about words for this disposable track anyway.... and it's less distracting as you play the "real" guitar track.

Much joy to you in growing music easily without getting lost in the chords!
©2013 DianaDee Osborne;  all rights reserved

Saturday, April 27, 2013

SHORTEN Your Song by MULTIPLYING It

Yes, I deliberately picked a blog title that "makes no sense".   But it will in just a few moments:
Have you ever been so PASSIONATE about a topic that you just wanted to write lots and lots of lyrics to draw OTHER people to be equally EXCITED about it? Which isn't pretty and "professional" wording... 
but you yearned to write a lot of song lyrics to ENCOURAGE.  To  help others.
To  INTRIGUE  others about possibilities for them.

But  ok,   back to reality:
How often do you see 12-minute songs on any CD?
Most studio producers -- including at both of the professional studios where I've recorded a total of over 300 songs (shared NOT to brag but to show I "know" something about studios) -- will tell you to try to keep your song around 3 to 3-1/2 minutes.  No technology reason.  Only because that's the norm.... because people might get tired of a song after 5 minutes!
Here's an easy,  tested solution:  a  Song  SERIES

Many audio programs like iTunes let you go into the "Get Info" section and, under the INFO tab, click a box that says "Part of a compilation."

Basic idea is to simply SPLIT A SONG  into separate songs with SIMILAR  TITLES.  And, since this is an "Easy Songwriting Hints" blog,  I'll share the easy songwriting method I've found to work really well.  The example I will use is from my newest song series from April 2013.

CLICK HERE      for  WEBSITE examples  (no registration or cost)

Song concept:   I wanted to put all of Chapter 9 of the Bible's 
Book of Nehemiah  into new music that I would write for it.  The ENTIRE HISTORY OF ISRAEL from its beginning until around 450 B.C. is outlined in this single chapter.  However -- it's a LONG chapter.
1.     I decided that I would write 3 songs for this song concept.
2.     Alphabetically, their first word must be the same for them to be grouped together in file listings.  I choose ISRAEL HISTORY  as the first two words of each title.
3.     Then I had 2 choices:  Either put a NUMBER next in the title ("Israel History 1 Subtitle")   OR, to have the 3 files appear in order in any media program or computer file list,   contrive (or "strategize" - yep that sounds 'smart') to have subtitles in alphabetical order.
My choices:  ISRAEL HISTORY BEGINNING   (Nehemiah 9: 1-15)
                     ISRAEL HISTORY DRIFTING      (Nehemiah 9: 16-29)
                     ISRAEL HISTORY GATHERING  (Nehemiah 9: 30 - end)
       
4.   Next,  you need something that is in COMMON within each of the songs, to give your compilation series some cohesion.   I accomplished several cohesion points: 
      a.   I designed each song to have 5 verses, all to be sung at the same tempo.
      b.   Verse 1 of each song is identical.... the first verses of Nehemiah,  words of praise.
      c.   After creating the basic music tracks for Song #1,  I DUPLICATED the project twice. Then re-named those to match the titles of Song #2 and #3. (Be SURE you like all that music first, so you do not need to put corrections into 3 projects.  For lots of hints for great music tracks, see my free blog DianaDeeGarageband.blogspot.com ).
      d.   I wrote the music sheet for Song #1 using my free-use copyrighted  Osborne TExt-Based Notation System  (OTEN) -- No fancy music programs needed for you to learn,  and any beginner can play music written with it -- no 1/8th note or rest symbols either.  THE MUSIC SHEET INCLUDED MELODY NOTES for Song #1.

      e.  After duplicating the music sheet ONCE and re-naming it for Song #3 (not 2) which would have the same melody as cohesion,  I deleted the lyrics for verses 2 thru 5 that had been in Song 1.  Then I simply wrote lyrics matching the 3rd set of Nehemiah verses.

FINALLY -- GIVE EACH SONG INDIVIDUALITY.

5.    I went into the duplicated project now named for Song #2 and added more music tracks -- an oboe for the melody not yet written (see below), additional "atmosphere" tracks, and so on.
6.     Then I did the same as step 5 for Song #3.  You can add any creative touch. When  adding tracks,  we often must REDUCE something to avoid an overwhelming sound. So as I layered in new tracks, I took down the volume or shortened original tracks.

7.     For the duplicated music sheet for Song #2 (Step 4e) , I duplicated the MELODY line of every line (see example), and then re-named the lower line from "melody" to "alto". 
Then wrote a completely different melody for Song #2 that is in harmony with Songs #1 and 3 -- another cohesion point within the 3-song series.   Then I deleted the music notes on the "melody" line to be ready to write NEW MELODY for song #2.

8.    Last, for each of the three songs, my drummer and lead guitarist will add individual creative touches of their own that gives a different feel for each of the multiplied songs:)
It's truly SO  much fun using strategies to develop new songs!   I hope that some of the hints on this blog  and my other blogs and website might help bring you
MUCH JOY   as you GROW  YOUR  OWN  MUSIC!
©2013 DianaDee Osborne;  all rights reserved - BUT feel free to share, with copyright info.

Thursday, April 25, 2013

Do NOT Hyphenate Right on Music Sheets

Remember all those classes where you had to learn the "correct" way to divide a word into syllables?  Well, forget the rules when you are typing your music sheet into counts.     (See my website for information about my OSBORNE TExt-based music sheets.)   

WHY hyphenate wrongly?   A  GREAT reason -----

You want to sing easily.... to tell at a glance what the next word is.   So sometimes you WANT to incorrectly hyphenate the word.  Put together the letters that you want to sing together.
                             EXAMPLE:      HISTORY

The English teacher would say this is divided as   "his -- tory"  .
However, you want (especially in slower songs) to put that T in the first syllable
As one of my earlier blogs hints,
we people tend to automatically assume what the next word is as we listen to song. 

If you do not put the T in syllable one,
the listener may be caught off guard because of expecting another word next.
Might miss a key point in your song's  message.

ALSO -- this helps you (or other singers) to see at a glance where you want to be sure to
enunciate specific letters in the word you are singing,
to be more clear to your listeners.

JUST A THOUGHT... a HINT to share from my experience.
I've never read hints like this elsewhere.... 
I hope they'll help you to
HAVE MUCH JOY  as you write out your new songs!
©2013 DianaDee Osborne;  all rights reserved - BUT feel free to share with copyright info.